03-17-2013, 08:20 AM
your rhymes seem like a fumbling of ideas about this person -- they are not steady but forced
another problem with this poem is that i feel like i've read it many times before
if you're going to write about love, be genuine and original, eh?
another problem with this poem is that i feel like i've read it many times before
if you're going to write about love, be genuine and original, eh?
I'll be there in a minute.