03-16-2013, 04:16 AM
Thank you for the critique. I went back to it this morning and tried some revisions. My new title is "When I say I love you" and I tried to make it a little less narrative.
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Just words [working title] - by karinane - 03-13-2013, 03:04 AM
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RE: Just words [working title] - by karinane - 03-13-2013, 09:35 PM
RE: Just words [working title] - by Claire - 03-14-2013, 08:20 AM
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