Hope

[Aphroditeny]

Reading over you poem, I notice there are many couplets that indicate some hopeful change while there are a couple stanza which seem to contradict that mood (they seem to have been dropped into the middle of the piece: S3 and S4).

You're in need of a more orderly narrative. Also, there's little hint about why hope springs eternal, which I think would be an interesting theme to discuss.

Mikey.

Hi Mikey,

My intent with this piece was to portray meloncholy of long lost days of love but that life goes on and we forget the bad and remember the good in order to move on ahead and to allow oneself to hope/dream again.