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[Mattie]

Grettings.

What is Nose Day? An odd phrase.

And the '(desire)' bit. Is that to tell the reader what the line means, or... what is it's purpose.

her son empowered with love peace rock 'n roll


I liked this line, and the casual reference to jesus and his 'mum'. It's tossed out there so loosely that I thought you might actually be taking a shot on the church. But no, all seems sincere (or is it?).

Not all your enjambments contribute positively to the poem, though.

Mikey.

Hi Mikey

Thanks for your reply,
I wrote this from a few notes scribbled on paper.

A Nose Day means:I don't like using Red Nose Day as a writer
I do like to shorten words as not to repeat the obvious.
I'm also saying follow your nose your insight.
When I say the words nose day sounds like nose gay a posy of flowers.
No
I wasn't having a crack at the church in fact I was supporting the
failing church.
Back in the day Saint Peter or God himself said to Saint Francis save my church,
Francis our new pope has that job.
The purpose of (desire) is to let any one know the meaning of such said flower and also to have the desire to love god.
LOVE peace rock 'n roll:is saying music has been around humans since the start of time.
Question what does the word Enjambments mean?.

Thanks
Mattie