03-15-2013, 01:29 PM
(03-15-2013, 09:12 AM)Jae Mc Donnell Wrote: Recently I found an object that speaks in volumesHey. Glad you've finally found yourself.
When I open it, it goes silent
If I show it to friends, they laugh
If I hide it, it wallows and cries
In the cold light of understanding
Its surface shows my reflection
The object: Me
The second to last line might be fun if the "my" is replaced with "its".
I'm guessing the whole thing is meant as a riddle. Maybe you could re-work it as an actual riddle? Of course, you'll have to add a bit so the reader has a hope of solving it.
Mikey.

