03-15-2013, 01:10 PM
Reading over you poem, I notice there are many couplets that indicate some hopeful change while there are a couple stanza which seem to contradict that mood (they seem to have been dropped into the middle of the piece: S3 and S4).
You're in need of a more orderly narrative. Also, there's little hint about why hope springs eternal, which I think would be an interesting theme to discuss.
Mikey.
You're in need of a more orderly narrative. Also, there's little hint about why hope springs eternal, which I think would be an interesting theme to discuss.
Mikey.