03-15-2013, 08:35 AM
Hi Mikey
The tidy edit is a good one as is the title, I havent seen a poem like this before and I find it very interesting, your choice of subject goes a long way in making this work and the bleak nature of your observations really puts over a challenging image, well done and thanks for the read. TOMH
The tidy edit is a good one as is the title, I havent seen a poem like this before and I find it very interesting, your choice of subject goes a long way in making this work and the bleak nature of your observations really puts over a challenging image, well done and thanks for the read. TOMH
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