03-13-2013, 09:35 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I don't know if intrusive is what I was going for. Maybe I will try to make it a little less raw...
It is based on an old relationship of mine and a recent conversation with my sister about her current relationship. I tried to take what she was saying and funnel it through my own experience (with a little more optimism).
It is based on an old relationship of mine and a recent conversation with my sister about her current relationship. I tried to take what she was saying and funnel it through my own experience (with a little more optimism).
(03-13-2013, 07:18 AM)saeity Wrote: Hi karinane, welcome to the forum.I gather from this the N is in love with someone whose terribly shy to show emotions. I read this as if reading a personal love letter, I felt a little intrusive
saeity.