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I am.
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03-13-2013, 08:34 PM
Hi milemke08, I like this a lot, I feel it has a song quality to it, I also like the line 'til the reaper comes and lays you to rest.' So personally I think the repetition of that line after each stanza and repeating the first stanza again would enhance the piece- thanks for sharing.
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