Child of Darkness

[NakedBear]

Hi Gemma,

This sounds pretty good to me, except you could remove many of the words 'the' from it to make it read more smoothly.

I like the sound of it, but am not at all sure of its meaning. Maybe I should read it more closely... or I should get some sleep.

Thanks for posting.

EDIT: oh, I think I get it. A somewhat crazy person attacks two people with a knife. Is that close.
Mikey.

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EDIT: right-o! Sorry.