With this inform all critique
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I like the content. It is somewhat tautological but what the heck: So we talk rocks and oxen here? ,-) Why not?
Fine edit by Leanne re meter!

When I read the first 2 lines I was reminded of skiing in Northern Italy (or Suedtirol if you prefer). That street sign: Caduta sassi!" *(=falling rocks!) popped up in my head. (Bringing back some nice memories (NOT of falling rocks!) Then of course I, being the sick guy I am, imagined falling oxen** instead of rocks. And so forth. The Bard update: from fattest oxen we desire increase ,-)) ) Very Monty Pythonish! First laughter in my morning. Thanks!

I think it is a good intro poem.

cheers

Serge

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* caduta sassi! ----> http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Datei:Caduta_Sassi.PNG
** HaHa, I wasn't the first. Look here --> http://www.yossam.it/fotografie/fotograf..._buoi.html
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With this inform all critique - by NakedBear - 03-10-2013, 03:24 PM
RE: With this inform all critique - by billy - 03-10-2013, 08:34 PM
RE: With this inform all critique - by NakedBear - 03-11-2013, 04:06 AM
RE: With this inform all critique - by Tommy - 03-11-2013, 07:45 AM
RE: With this inform all critique - by NakedBear - 03-11-2013, 03:33 PM
RE: With this inform all critique - by Leanne - 03-11-2013, 11:27 AM
RE: With this inform all critique - by serge gurkski - 03-11-2013, 03:30 PM
RE: With this inform all critique - by NakedBear - 03-11-2013, 03:58 PM
RE: With this inform all critique - by Leanne - 03-11-2013, 03:56 PM



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