Brass Bold

[billy]

thanks for all the feedback, i will do an edit later today though i can't promise to using all your valued suggestions.

i agree that cavernous lungs is weak.
casually is weak though i'm not sure how i'll sort that out without just ditching it as has been suggested.
i may combine the title and last line.
will also look at the plump calf line.
and light/lighters thing.