03-10-2013, 04:03 PM
I enjoyed this. This is an impressive piece of work you put together. Seeing as how I really enjoy the use of the stars and space as the object used for the symbolism. But maybe that's just because I've always liked the stars 
I also like the use of alliteration in stanza three line two, it makes it flows nicely. Great job and keep writing!
I also like the use of alliteration in stanza three line two, it makes it flows nicely. Great job and keep writing!