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Pietas
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03-10-2013, 08:50 AM
(03-10-2013, 08:38 AM)Leanne Wrote: Thanks Serge -- the lines were feeling out of place before, so I built them a new poemSorry, Leanne. I just updated my comment this very second, recalling that you - and rightly so - demanded proof for "I like it" - comments. There are more layers (I see 2 more) but I just showed some of the poetical devices you use in your poem that convinced me. (And these are - imo - never outdated. ;-) |
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RE: Pietas - by serge gurkski - 03-10-2013, 07:31 AM
RE: Pietas - by Leanne - 03-10-2013, 08:38 AM
RE: Pietas - by serge gurkski - 03-10-2013, 08:50 AM
RE: Pietas - by Leanne - 03-10-2013, 10:22 AM
RE: Pietas - by serge gurkski - 03-10-2013, 10:29 AM
RE: Pietas - by tectak - 03-10-2013, 09:41 PM
RE: Pietas - by shemthepenman - 03-10-2013, 10:12 PM
RE: Pietas - by serge gurkski - 03-11-2013, 01:01 AM
RE: Pietas - by Todd - 03-11-2013, 03:52 AM
RE: Pietas - by Leanne - 03-11-2013, 04:48 AM
RE: Pietas - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-20-2013, 01:04 AM
RE: Pietas - by Leanne - 03-20-2013, 04:03 AM
RE: Pietas - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-20-2013, 05:18 AM
RE: Pietas - by Leanne - 03-20-2013, 05:27 AM
RE: Pietas - by milo - 03-20-2013, 07:36 AM
RE: Pietas - by Leanne - 03-20-2013, 02:41 PM
RE: Pietas - by UnofficiallyMe - 03-21-2013, 12:08 AM
RE: Pietas - by joshuacan - 03-21-2013, 12:33 PM
RE: Pietas - by Leanne - 03-21-2013, 03:40 PM
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