Brass Bold

[Keith]

Casually she rubs under her breast, great opening image
then lights a bong with the lighter could use stokes rather than lights
she stole from the handicap charity shop,
where she use to work part time.nice touch

Plump like a calf
her tits loll across her upper arm.
Eyes wide, she squeezes smoke deep another good image
into cavernous lungs. Not sure about this line

I kiss the small of her back
just above crease of a Ruben's arse.
My thumbs rest in the dimples
at the base of her padded spine. you kid us that you care

"fuck off you dirty old bugger," then smash the illusion great stuff

she snorts like a pig hunting truffles.
Tells me to leave the money
next to the enamel basin on the wash stand. I enjoyed the scene
I think about leaving a tip.

She wasn't worth it. On Point

Great write Billy very much enjoyed the vouyeristic view point, standing in the room and feeling tacky with the dirty old bugger. K