03-10-2013, 07:26 AM
Brass Bold
Casually she rubs under her breast,
then lights a bong with the lighter
she stole from the handicap charity shop,
where she use to work part time. <"USED" to work>
Plump like a calf
her tits loll across her upper arm.
Eyes wide, she squeezes smoke deep
into cavernous lungs.
I kiss the small of her back
just above crease of a Ruben's arse.
My thumbs rest in the dimples
at the base of her padded spine.
"fuck off you dirty old bugger,"
she snorts like a pig hunting truffles.
Tells me to leave the money
next to the enamel basin on the wash stand.
I think about leaving a tip.
She wasn't worth it. < I agree with TODD here. It would be great if this were the title of the piece, and you ended with I think about leaving a tip.>
Overall, I really enjoyed the read!
Casually she rubs under her breast,
then lights a bong with the lighter
she stole from the handicap charity shop,
where she use to work part time. <"USED" to work>
Plump like a calf
her tits loll across her upper arm.
Eyes wide, she squeezes smoke deep
into cavernous lungs.
I kiss the small of her back
just above crease of a Ruben's arse.
My thumbs rest in the dimples
at the base of her padded spine.
"fuck off you dirty old bugger,"
she snorts like a pig hunting truffles.
Tells me to leave the money
next to the enamel basin on the wash stand.
I think about leaving a tip.
She wasn't worth it. < I agree with TODD here. It would be great if this were the title of the piece, and you ended with I think about leaving a tip.>
Overall, I really enjoyed the read!