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[shemthepenman]

Hello, first off this is seriously depressing. But after that a good read, I really like it. I was initially concerned with the word ‘tits’ but grew to like it. and, I have moaned about swearing before, but ‘fuck off!’ is precisely the kind of thing I really like – but would have liked an exclamation mark at the end instead of a comma.
‘I kiss the small of her back…’ anywhere but ‘the small’ of someone’s back!
and ‘used to work…’

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ps. I love the way Ruben's arses follow you around the room [yeah yeah stolen joke but still]