03-09-2013, 11:59 AM
I appreciate that this is your first poem here and no doubt this is an honest mistake, but the rules of the critique forums state that "YOU MUST GIVE FEEDBACK BEFORE POSTING A POEM". I have moved this thread to Miscellaneous Poetry but should you wish it moved back to Serious after you've spent some time with other people's poetry, you need only PM a mod with your request/ admin
It could be worse