03-09-2013, 10:47 AM
I agre with the others about improving on the meter, however I really loved the thoughts in the poem and could really relate to the feelings it spoke of. Thank you for sharing! 
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RE: New hope - by billy - 03-08-2013, 10:54 PM
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RE: New hope - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 10:47 AM
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