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03-09-2013, 05:41 AM

Hi Aphroditeny, I like your rhyme scheme here AA/BB of iambic tetrameter - technically pleasing on the ear. Smile

You may wish to revise 'distresse's' in S4 L2 -extra syllable, a tad pedantric, i know Smile

thanks for the read.

saeity.

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Because - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 03:15 AM

RE: Because - by saeity - 03-09-2013, 05:41 AM

RE: Because - by cidermaid - 03-09-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Because - by Aphroditeny - 03-09-2013, 08:41 AM

RE: Because - by Tommy - 03-09-2013, 10:01 AM

RE: Because - by Aphroditeny - 03-15-2013, 11:33 PM

RE: Because - by Jae Mc Donnell - 03-16-2013, 01:52 AM

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