03-07-2013, 04:53 PM
Hi keith,
Another micro-world. In a rain storm puddle.
Loved the first line. (My old dog used to say when it had stopped raining - he had very firm views concerning rain).
The "streak" in L3 caused me to giggle and given your previous humourful poems I'm assuming it was intentional. Loved the image of a streaking worm. Terrorising the "nice" lakeside community with nudity. (Appoligies if not intentional - but still thinks it works with the semi double meaning)... four naked worms in a coxless! Then ripple becomes nipple in the mind despite how many times I read it and note it is ripple.
Sorry my brain is not normally this way inclined, obviously been spending too long in the sewer. 
Then we ("nice") individuals walk on looking for some well mannered slugs.
Either as an image of nature or as I had corrupted your nice poem...I really enjoyed this one (Again - damm it!
You can turn out great little poems all day it seems) ><
Thanks for the read AJ.
Another micro-world. In a rain storm puddle.
Loved the first line. (My old dog used to say when it had stopped raining - he had very firm views concerning rain).
The "streak" in L3 caused me to giggle and given your previous humourful poems I'm assuming it was intentional. Loved the image of a streaking worm. Terrorising the "nice" lakeside community with nudity. (Appoligies if not intentional - but still thinks it works with the semi double meaning)... four naked worms in a coxless! Then ripple becomes nipple in the mind despite how many times I read it and note it is ripple.
Sorry my brain is not normally this way inclined, obviously been spending too long in the sewer. Then we ("nice") individuals walk on looking for some well mannered slugs.Either as an image of nature or as I had corrupted your nice poem...I really enjoyed this one (Again - damm it!
You can turn out great little poems all day it seems) ><Thanks for the read AJ.