03-07-2013, 01:02 PM
This is my first ever poem! I find it really hard to express myself without sounding like a cliche depressed bore. So with this i just tried to write the first thing that came to my head, so atleast it would be real. Let me know what you think! 
False Hope?
In a world so dark I see nothing but rain,
my efforts to please fail again,
But i must keep chasing,
chasing. Even if a false reality,
what lays in this holds no meaning,
I find life through you,
I open my vulnerabilities and hope for acceptance,
with a single embrace I can see again.
with you, life isn't that bad,
infact, it's all I can ask for
False Hope?
In a world so dark I see nothing but rain,
my efforts to please fail again,
But i must keep chasing,
chasing. Even if a false reality,
what lays in this holds no meaning,
I find life through you,
I open my vulnerabilities and hope for acceptance,
with a single embrace I can see again.
with you, life isn't that bad,
infact, it's all I can ask for