03-07-2013, 10:02 AM
I thought it was great!
The rhyming was good and not forced and I loved your thoughts and feelings.
The conflict of loving and getting hurt or not loving but not living.
Tnank you for sharing
The rhyming was good and not forced and I loved your thoughts and feelings.
The conflict of loving and getting hurt or not loving but not living.
Tnank you for sharing

