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03-06-2013, 05:56 PM

(03-06-2013, 04:42 AM)cidermaid Wrote: Is it a cheatah?

Quick question: Did you mean prey as in a victim, rather than an offering / request of help to a god?

Yeah it is Smile

Yeah I meant prey but to kill a pray or kill a request of help sounds good too.
thanks I can of need help from a critic

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Savana - by snower - 03-05-2013, 08:34 AM

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