03-05-2013, 09:38 AM
Jae: glad you liked it. =] they're actually a series of 3 poems not edits. I kept them all pretty different from each other on purpose, glad I you could connect with one of them =]
others: I posted an edit. trimmed here, added there. put in punctuation. thoughts?
thanks in advance.
others: I posted an edit. trimmed here, added there. put in punctuation. thoughts?
thanks in advance.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.

