Help me

[brandontoh]

The distillation of distant pleas
with no hope of anyone listening. -- I really like the first line, but feel that the second line can be improved upon so the imagery can be more powerful. As it stands, the second line is really cliche, and takes me out of the experience.
This modern world has overshadowed my fall
from corporate grace, -- Really interesting, but I think you can cut the excess here. 'Modern world overshadowed/fall from corporate grace.'
I just don’t belong here;
I am tired of repeating myself.
I kneel to no man,
no one can find me -- These 4 lines are a little too cliche. You started off rather strongly, so some rewording will do that justice I feel. =)
and my tears are only sacrificial -
a new kind of opium for the people...
No! Over my dead body
will I fear what I can’t control.
Help me... -- Too monotonous I feel. Try to use more emotive words and feelings to strengthen the image. Overall, a good attempt, but there's potential for more. =) Hope I'm of help!