03-03-2013, 11:15 PM
Hi Leanne, Thanks for the comments.
Have altered the punctuation mentioned and taken your suggestion about the last stanza and tried something out in edit above,be interested to Hear if you think this works / was what you were meaning from your comments.
Thanks again for the support and help AJ.
Have altered the punctuation mentioned and taken your suggestion about the last stanza and tried something out in edit above,be interested to Hear if you think this works / was what you were meaning from your comments.
Thanks again for the support and help AJ.