the poet

[justcloudy]

Billy: thanks for the feedback. I see what you mean about the wordiness, thx. also, I put huge gaps because really it's 3 poems but they're meant to be read as a whole, so I didn't want to post one each day for 3 days.
Rowens: yes and yes.
Serge: wow that's so flattering. thank you so much. ^____^ I'll try it out with punctuation and see what I think. and yea, I'm a fan of the uncategorized swirls too.