Empty table

[serge gurkski]

What can I say as a reader?
I do like the title a lot (very catchy)
I love the first two stanzas (with one minor objection: line one in stanza two. I think you overdosed here.)
With the other stanzas you suddeny change metaphors. I was just at the sea reading you and then I find myself in a restaurant.

I like shock effects. In general. ;-) I am not sure they work in your poem here.

I enjoyed the read.


cheers
Serge