03-02-2013, 08:09 PM
Lucy, there's no reason for you to feel stupid. This is a new poem that hasn't been exposed to an audience yet, so the fault is more than likely with the writer 
Billy, the lines you don't like are where the poem began. I don't like them much either. As time passes, I expect they'll make a graceful exit.
Billy, the lines you don't like are where the poem began. I don't like them much either. As time passes, I expect they'll make a graceful exit.
It could be worse