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the poet
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#4
03-02-2013, 10:52 AM
I like this poem of course, just like anything you write.
I think, this time I'd use punctuation.

"it pleads to be let out
outside the maze
of uncategorized swirls"

my favorite lines.
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Messages In This Thread
the poet - by justcloudy - 03-01-2013, 07:54 PM
RE: the poet - by billy - 03-01-2013, 10:22 PM
RE: the poet - by rowens - 03-02-2013, 01:12 AM
RE: the poet - by serge gurkski - 03-02-2013, 10:52 AM
RE: the poet - by justcloudy - 03-02-2013, 11:28 PM
RE: the poet - by serge gurkski - 03-03-2013, 02:09 AM
RE: the poet - by Jae Mc Donnell - 03-03-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: the poet - by serge gurkski - 03-03-2013, 11:25 PM
RE: the poet - by justcloudy - 03-05-2013, 09:38 AM
RE: the poet - by serge gurkski - 03-08-2013, 07:20 AM
RE: the poet - by Tommy - 03-12-2013, 11:36 AM
RE: the poet - by justcloudy - 03-27-2013, 06:12 AM



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