03-02-2013, 05:05 AM
Tom, if it helps, I've still called you lots of rude names :p
As billy said, there's no "nice" in serious, it's all about being honest and ensuring that poems do what they set out to do. This is a poem written for a specific purpose and, with a little punctuation shuffle, it fulfills that purpose perfectly. It would be just as good if your guinea pig had died.
As billy said, there's no "nice" in serious, it's all about being honest and ensuring that poems do what they set out to do. This is a poem written for a specific purpose and, with a little punctuation shuffle, it fulfills that purpose perfectly. It would be just as good if your guinea pig had died.
It could be worse