03-01-2013, 07:50 PM
(02-28-2013, 11:49 PM)shemthepenman Wrote: I really like this. You know, I did have one issue, but it turns out i misread the line 'let the duck-down night caress you' as 'let the duck-down night dress you'...Thanks shem.
anyhow, great piece of work, much enjoyed.
I guess I could sell this with xxxxxxxx before mother. Stick in her nationality and bingo! a sensitive verse.
You've all been kind to me, sensitive to the raisond'etre......but it won't save you...not any of you...

Seriously, thanks.
Best,
tectak

