Not before time(Ruby 1918-2013) Edit 1 leanne
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(02-28-2013, 11:49 PM)shemthepenman Wrote:  I really like this. You know, I did have one issue, but it turns out i misread the line 'let the duck-down night caress you' as 'let the duck-down night dress you'...
anyhow, great piece of work, much enjoyed.
Thanks shem.
I guess I could sell this with xxxxxxxx before mother. Stick in her nationality and bingo! a sensitive verse.
You've all been kind to me, sensitive to the raisond'etre......but it won't save you...not any of you...Smile
Seriously, thanks.
Best,
tectak
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RE: Not before time(Ruby 1918-2013) Edit 1 leanne - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 05:24 AM
RE: Not before time(Ruby 1918-2013) Edit 1 leanne - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 11:19 PM
RE: Not before time(Ruby 1918-2013) Edit 1 leanne - by tectak - 03-01-2013, 07:50 PM



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