02-28-2013, 11:57 PM
This is just a short poetic sketch which doesn't lay claim to perfection. All opinions how to improve the poem is welcomed! Thank you!
Quote:Awaken my love, May begins it month
And the Spring is filled with youth and joy
Flowers beautifully blossom in many colors
And the Spring water makes musical noise.
Rush up my love, through the open glade
To our lushly love nest.
I give you the eternity ring.