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Second poem -- critique appreciated
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02-28-2013, 04:56 AM
The rhymes don't seem to fit this poem. It depends on how you look at it though. I do some things I call "demonic rhymes". And looking from that point of view, I can see them as having some purpose. The rest of it does seem to need a little something more, but I'm not sure what right now.
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Second poem -- critique appreciated - by Ethereal - 02-21-2013, 09:47 AM
RE: Second poem -- critique appreciated - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 04:56 AM
RE: Second poem -- critique appreciated - by Ethereal - 02-28-2013, 01:21 PM
RE: Second poem -- critique appreciated - by saeity - 03-03-2013, 07:42 PM
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