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I Don't Care
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02-28-2013, 01:57 AM
(02-27-2013, 08:40 AM)TimeOnMyHands Wrote: This rolls very nicley, the opening line grabs me and I like the way you drop the alliteration before it gets too obvious, nice job. Thanks for the read TOMHThanks, I'm glad people have been saying they like the rhythm of this one; I usually find that to be one of my weaknesses. |
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I Don't Care - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 06:01 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:06 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 06:34 AM
RE: Untitled - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 06:07 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:46 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 07:26 AM
RE: Untitled - by justcloudy - 02-27-2013, 07:33 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 08:01 AM
RE: Untitled - by Keith - 02-27-2013, 08:40 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 01:57 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 05:56 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 05:59 AM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 06:05 AM
RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 06:07 AM
RE: Untitled - by justcloudy - 02-28-2013, 09:16 PM
RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 03-02-2013, 03:34 AM
RE: I Don't Care - by Wjames - 03-14-2013, 04:11 AM
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