Sorrow's rain

Sorrow's rain

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02-28-2013, 01:39 AM

(02-28-2013, 01:32 AM)rowens Wrote: Now you have sadness in the first line. Sadness is a noun. Sometimes people play with language, like you said. But is that what you want? Or do you want sad clouds, or clouds of sadness?

Yup... clouds of sadness... so From sadness clouds is right?

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Sorrow's rain - by LovePhantom - 02-27-2013, 09:25 PM

RE: Sorrow rain - by billy - 02-27-2013, 11:40 PM

RE: Sorrow rain - by LovePhantom - 02-28-2013, 12:56 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 01:09 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by LovePhantom - 02-28-2013, 01:20 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 01:23 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by LovePhantom - 02-28-2013, 01:28 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 01:32 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by LovePhantom - 02-28-2013, 01:39 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 01:53 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by Pseudonym - 03-02-2013, 07:39 AM

RE: Sorrow's rain - by serge gurkski - 03-02-2013, 10:46 AM

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