02-27-2013, 11:42 PM
this is cool little number. it fills the rquirements for a senryu and shows you don't always need a 5,7,5 formay. i'd remove the title and just call it a senryu.
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On the slab - by escorial - 02-27-2013, 08:11 PM
RE: On the slab - by billy - 02-27-2013, 11:42 PM
RE: On the slab - by cidermaid - 02-28-2013, 03:07 AM
RE: On the slab - by Keith - 03-01-2013, 05:27 AM
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