I Don't Care

I Don't Care

Keith

No Time On His Hands Now

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02-27-2013, 08:40 AM

This rolls very nicley, the opening line grabs me and I like the way you drop the alliteration before it gets too obvious, nice job. Thanks for the read TOMH

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I Don't Care - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 06:01 AM

RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:06 AM

RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 06:34 AM

RE: Untitled - by newsclippings - 02-27-2013, 06:07 AM

RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-27-2013, 06:46 AM

RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 07:26 AM

RE: Untitled - by justcloudy - 02-27-2013, 07:33 AM

RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-27-2013, 08:01 AM

RE: Untitled - by Keith - 02-27-2013, 08:40 AM

RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 01:57 AM

RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 05:56 AM

RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 05:59 AM

RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 02-28-2013, 06:05 AM

RE: Untitled - by rowens - 02-28-2013, 06:07 AM

RE: Untitled - by justcloudy - 02-28-2013, 09:16 PM

RE: Untitled - by Wjames - 03-02-2013, 03:34 AM

RE: I Don't Care - by Wjames - 03-14-2013, 04:11 AM

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