02-26-2013, 10:21 PM
(02-26-2013, 09:49 PM)billy Wrote: ruby would love this poem,Thanks billy. Crematorium in an hour. I am fine....so far.
i'm quite comfortable giving honest feedback on personal poems though it can be hard at times,
thanksfully i like all of this one. the 2nd line is a treat. it feels so comforting.
there's a good feel of family about the piece as well.
thanks for the read.
Best,
Tom

