Not before time. ( Ruby.1918-2013)
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(02-26-2013, 09:49 PM)billy Wrote:  ruby would love this poem,
i'm quite comfortable giving honest feedback on personal poems though it can be hard at times,
thanksfully i like all of this one. the 2nd line is a treat. it feels so comforting.
there's a good feel of family about the piece as well.

thanks for the read.
Thanks billy. Crematorium in an hour. I am fine....so far.
Best,
Tom
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Not before time. ( Ruby.1918-2013) - by tectak - 02-26-2013, 10:11 AM
RE: Not before time. ( Ruby.1918-2013) - by billy - 02-26-2013, 09:49 PM
RE: Not before time. ( Ruby.1918-2013) - by tectak - 02-26-2013, 10:21 PM
RE: Not before time. ( Ruby.1918-2013) - by billy - 02-27-2013, 12:43 AM



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