carry on

[billy]

hi aaron.

i'd suggest using the verse verse as a long chorus
and making the 2nd verse the start of the song, other than that i have no ideas. we do have a miscellaneous forum for stuff that isn't just poetry, songs, spoken word stuff etc. maybe you'd get better feedback in there from some of the musicians on the site. carry on fels a little weak as a title.

Look for those who care
Look for those who know
the life I knew
the one I left behind
and I drive
to that familiar place
and I find
love from a familiar face
and I
sit back and enjoy the ride.

Where I've been
promises broken
attempts to mend
they go unspoken
still, I carry on

cause worries I have
they've all been lifted
the world I wrote
the pages shifted
now, I carry on

I carry on
I carry on
I carry on
I carry on

Wolves they speak
please don't listen
don't turn your head
to see blood glisten
just carry on

worries i have
they've all been lifted
the world I wrote
the pages shifted
now, I carry on

I carry on
carry on
just carry on
still carry on