02-26-2013, 02:04 AM
Aaron,
really loved this one. I love the way it sounds but I agree with some of the above commentors that the imagery needs to be a bit stronger, especially in the 3rd stanza my brain doesn't quite know what to picture.
beginning with "my imagination" the poem changes a lot and I love that. the two-in-one works really nicely.
really loved this one. I love the way it sounds but I agree with some of the above commentors that the imagery needs to be a bit stronger, especially in the 3rd stanza my brain doesn't quite know what to picture.
beginning with "my imagination" the poem changes a lot and I love that. the two-in-one works really nicely.
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The howling beast is back.
The howling beast is back.