Paper Cut Melodrama

[tectak]

Hi all, sorry for the late response, but again thanks very much for your thoughts...

billy... no worries, my first draft had 'Holocene' as a stand in word before I ventured over to wikipedia

tectak... thanks very much for your crit. This poem is based off an older one I wrote about a kitchen accident. I felt I handled the transition to the surreal better in that one, so will revisit it here, time permitting.

newsclippings... I recon there's probably lots like this. Downside of being in physics is, you're not very well read. One day I'll read Sophocles, one day...

Thanks again,
Gary

Read Feynman...knocks quarks of Soph......and as a bonus, you won't understand him, either
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