02-25-2013, 11:38 AM
thanx for your critiques everyone. i forgot i posted this sorry i didnt get back to you right away. this poem def needs some work those last four stanzas use to be a different poem but i decided to smush them together. I'll be working on smoothing things out.
thanx again for reading this
oh and one last thing. punctuation is stupid!
thanx again for reading this
oh and one last thing. punctuation is stupid!

