02-21-2013, 01:41 AM
seems to me you lost the way a little, 3 lines with 11 syllables and one with 12... check lines... 7, 8, 11, 12...
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Sonnet I: Our love, it seems to me...
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Sonnet I: Our love, it seems to me... - by crataegus - 02-20-2013, 10:33 PM
RE: Sonnet I: Our love, it seems to me... - by richardpoet - 02-21-2013, 01:41 AM
RE: Sonnet I: Our love, it seems to me... - by crataegus - 02-21-2013, 04:04 AM
RE: Sonnet I: Our love, it seems to me... - by Leanne - 02-21-2013, 05:09 AM
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