02-20-2013, 06:53 AM
Short, sweet little poem...it's nice and simple. But being a short poem you want it to have such an impact that you're not waiting for another stanza to give that "WOW"...so you need to create that within those 4 lines...I do really like this poem...it is so sweet, and so warming...but it does just need that little extra kick to it.
"We are the music makers
And we are the dreamers of dreams
Wandering by lone sea breakers
And sitting by desolate streams" ~ Arthur O'Shaughnessy
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My journey
And we are the dreamers of dreams
Wandering by lone sea breakers
And sitting by desolate streams" ~ Arthur O'Shaughnessy
http://invisibleshadows86.blogspot.co.uk/
My journey