02-19-2013, 05:47 PM
I'm really struggling with making it less impersonal...it's hard when it's a personal poem...I'm finding it hard to find words that keep it similar but not about 'me' and my hands...and this is the problem with all my poems...I feel something and I write it...and so that poem is personal to my feelings, but therefore impersonal to everyone else...
before I post anymore of my old ones up I will edit them and try and take away the impersonal style...will post both drafts....this is going to be very hard...lol
before I post anymore of my old ones up I will edit them and try and take away the impersonal style...will post both drafts....this is going to be very hard...lol
"We are the music makers
And we are the dreamers of dreams
Wandering by lone sea breakers
And sitting by desolate streams" ~ Arthur O'Shaughnessy
http://invisibleshadows86.blogspot.co.uk/
My journey
And we are the dreamers of dreams
Wandering by lone sea breakers
And sitting by desolate streams" ~ Arthur O'Shaughnessy
http://invisibleshadows86.blogspot.co.uk/
My journey