Oxycontin

[Smiffy]

Hi Martus, first let me say I find poetry by people on various drugs very interesting, never having taken drugs myself I have seen through poetry the pain and pleasure if you can call it that of drugs, mostly pain it has to be said. I enjoyed your poem though I do think it could be far shorter and have more impact,.A good edit would work wonders. Although lack of punctuation does not really bother me I know others who dislike it and rightly so, it does detract from the flow of the poem when you start thinking there should be a comma there etc. Having said that I have been brought to book several times for lack of punctuation in my own poems over the years but I think it is more important to get down what you want to say foremost.
Enjoyed the read ,hope you won the battle,
best to you
Smiffy