Paper Cut Melodrama

Paper Cut Melodrama

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02-16-2013, 12:50 AM

Hi Todd. Thanks for the crit, and glad you liked it. Ending with "All seems lost...to a paper cut" sounds very good, I played around with a few things but ended up settling (temporarily) on the relatively verbose last line.

Gary

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Paper Cut Melodrama - by PoetryAndPhysics - 02-14-2013, 03:55 PM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by Todd - 02-14-2013, 09:20 PM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by PoetryAndPhysics - 02-16-2013, 12:50 AM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by billy - 02-16-2013, 04:52 PM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by tectak - 02-20-2013, 09:10 AM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by newsclippings - 02-20-2013, 09:23 AM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by PoetryAndPhysics - 02-25-2013, 05:31 AM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by newsclippings - 02-25-2013, 09:25 AM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by tectak - 02-25-2013, 05:47 PM

RE: Paper Cut Melodrama - by PoetryAndPhysics - 02-26-2013, 12:26 AM

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