ode to purple

[Leanne]

I would suggest you read and comment on other people's poems in the workshop to improve your own understanding of how poetry may be written. While there are no hard and fast rules, it's generally accepted that if you muck about with grammar and sentence structure it should be for a specific purpose. This seems arbitrary -- unless you have a point to capitalising only three letters, I. B. O. If this isn't an acronym, then it doesn't seem very worthwhile, and the lack of capitals when used with end punctuation detracts greatly from the reading.